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  麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错DearLiMing,I'mexcitedabouthearingfromyou.ISeverythingOK?Iknowwhatworriesyoumostrecentlyiswhethertostayabroadorcomebackaftergraduating.Inmyopinion,it'sbetterforyouto

  麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错

  DearLiMing,

  I'mexcitedabouthearingfromyou.ISeverythingOK?

  Iknowwhatworriesyoumostrecentlyiswhethertostayabroadorcomebackaftergraduating.Inmyopinion,it'sbetterforyoutocomeback.Everyoneishere,yourfriends,parentsandmostrelative.BacktoChina,it'llbemoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsandwecanalsoseeyouoften.Thecareoftherelativeandthehelpoffriendswillgiveyoumuchmorelove.Thesewillhelpyoumakeprograssonyourwork.

  IhopemyadvicewillhelpyouandI'llsupportyouforever.

  Yours,

  LiHua

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2020-06-30 22:15
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  首先,IS应为Is,relative应为relatives,BacktoChina改为IfyougobacktoChina,wecanalsoseeyouoften,改为wecanalsomeeteachotherfrequently,比较好~prograss应为progress,最后一句我想这样说比较好...

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