麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错DearLiMing,I'mexcitedabouthearingfromyou.ISeverythingOK?Iknowwhatworriesyoumostrecentlyiswhethertostayabroadorcomebackaftergraduating.Inmyopinion,it'sbetterforyouto
麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错
DearLiMing,
I'mexcitedabouthearingfromyou.ISeverythingOK?
Iknowwhatworriesyoumostrecentlyiswhethertostayabroadorcomebackaftergraduating.Inmyopinion,it'sbetterforyoutocomeback.Everyoneishere,yourfriends,parentsandmostrelative.BacktoChina,it'llbemoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsandwecanalsoseeyouoften.Thecareoftherelativeandthehelpoffriendswillgiveyoumuchmorelove.Thesewillhelpyoumakeprograssonyourwork.
IhopemyadvicewillhelpyouandI'llsupportyouforever.
Yours,
LiHua