Themostimportantpersoninmylife

　　Imaymeetmanyimportantpeopleinmylife.ButIthinkmotheristhemostimportant.Andinmyheart,noonecanreplaceher.

　　Shegivesmelifeandkeepsmecompanyatanytime.WhenIamhappy,shesmileswithme.WhenIamsad,shewipesoffmytearsandcheersmeup.WhenIamsick,shetakesgoodcareofme.WhenIamindifficulty,shealwaysgivesmeahand.Shegivesmeallthatshecandoandwantsnothing.

　　I’msoluckytohavesuchanicemotherinmylife.Inreturn,Iwilldomybesttobecomethemostimportantpersoninherlife.

　　是网上的么

　　是的，稍改了下。。

　　老师看到出么

　　好像有点长

　　老师一般不会去查这个的吧。。

　　你是说还要改短点？

　　再短点

　　我不用那么长

　　也不要太华丽

　　我就是差生

　　Ithinkmymotheristhemostimportantpersoninmylife。Andinmyheart,noonecanreplaceher.

　　Shegivesmelifeandbringsmeup.WhenIamsick,shetakesgoodcareofme.ShegivesmeahandwhenI'mintrouble.Shedoesallthehousework.Sheisalsohard-working.

　　I’msoluckytohavesuchanicemother.IloveherverymuchandIwillloveherallmylife.

　　大概70个字左右，现在怎么样？