【Topic:Somepeoplethinkthatdevelopmentintechnologyiscausingenvironmentalproblems,whileotherssaythattechnologycansolvetheseproblems.Discussbothviews.Inmanypartsoftheworld,itisquitecommonthesedaysforpeopletousestate-of-】

　　Topic:Somepeoplethinkthatdevelopmentintechnologyiscausingenvironmentalproblems,whileotherssaythattechnologycansolvetheseproblems.Discussbothviews.

　　Inmanypartsoftheworld,itisquitecommonthesedaysforpeopletousestate-of-the-artfacilitiesindailylife,whichisregardedasbreadandbutteraswell.While,whenthesefacilitiesbringaboutconveniencetopeople,theyalsobringonenvironmentalproblemsatthesametime.

　　Protectionoftheenvironmentisincreasinglybecomingthefocusofgovernmentandcitizenconcerninmanyplacesoftheworld.Inordertoreducethehightechnologyimpactonenvironmentalpollution,somepeopleadvocatethatitisbetterforpeopletostartanewlifestyle,whichiswithoutanykindofelectronicproducts,plasticproductsandsoon.Forinstance,communicationtechnologymakespeoplemeetwitheachotherfewer.So,theythinkiflifetheydolikegreenlifestyle,theywillmeetfriendsmoreoften,aswellasbecomecheerfulandsociabilityratherthanonlysitinfrontofthecomputerorjustusemobilephonetochat,thentheyhavenolongertotroubleabouthowtolettheseuselesselectronicproductsdestoryfornotpollutingtheenvironment.

　　However,otherpeopleindicatedthatpeoplecanalsousehightechnologytosolvetheseproblems.Toputitsimply,itispossibleforpeopletocreateakindofmachine,whichcoulddecomposetheplastic,sothatenvironmentalpollutionwillnomorebeaproblem.andthenpeoplecouldusetimeandmoneymoreeffectivelyandefficientlywithhightechnologyinthisever-increasinglycrowdedandcomplicatedworld,ifonlypeoplereachabalancebetweentechnologyandenvironment.

　　Sooverall,myviewisthattheproblemofenvironmentalprotectionhasreachedthisstate.Thefewertechnologyweuse,thebetterprotectionwedo.

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