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  谁来帮我看下这篇英语文章(短篇滴`)有没有语病``?Goodmorning,everybody!AgreatmannamedJohnMiltononcesaid,“Agoodbookisthepreciouslife-bloodofamasterspirit,embalmedandtreasureduponpurposetoalifebeyondlife.

  谁来帮我看下这篇英语文章(短篇滴`)有没有语病``?

  Goodmorning,everybody!

  AgreatmannamedJohnMiltononcesaid,“Agoodbookisthepreciouslife-blood

  ofamasterspirit,embalmedandtreasured

  uponpurposetoalifebeyondlife.”

  Ilovebooks.IloveadventurebooksbecauseIliketomeetnewchallenges.IlovedetectiveormysterybooksbecauseIwanttolearntosolveproblemsormysteries.

  IfIhavealittlemoney,Iwouldbuybooks.That’me!

  Boysandgirls,let’slovebooksbecausetheymakeussosmart.

  Bye!

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  不知道你是几年级的学生,错误有一些,只是个人意见:

  1JohnMilton说的话完全看不明白是什么意思,如果这句话很出名,希望你能查到原句,否则的话就不写.在英语写作中最忌讳的就是翻译名人名言,因为经过英译汉和汉译英的二次翻译,所以会闹出很多笑话.

  2IloveadventurebooksbecauseI'dliketomeetnewchallenges.

  3IlovedetectiveandmysterybooksbecauseIwanttolearnhowtosolveproblems.

  4IfIhavepocketmoney(零花钱),Iwillsaveittobuymyfavoratebooks.

  5Thatisme!Bookisveryimportantinmylife.

  6Boysandgirls,pleaselovebooksbecausetheybringusknowledgeandmakeussmart.

  Thankyou!Bye!

  不知道你的这段话是不是要在课堂上说,如果是这样还不错,如果是要写作文,一定要注意尽量少用“I...”这样的句式.

2020-07-15 18:32:16

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