One-daytripinShanghai

　　IwenttoShanghailastweek.Itwassobig.Isawmanywonderfulthings.Butafter3dayswehadtobeback.Ihopeicanvisitthecityagain.

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　　One-daytripinShanghai

　　lastsummer,myfamilywenttoShanghaiforourvacation--myfather,motherandI.Itwasareallysweetmemory--Sunnyday,hospitalpeople,Beautifulsceneryandbusytreets!westaydthereforaweek.Inthisweek,wevisitPudong,theBund,Huangpuriver,Shanghaimuseumandsoon.Also,wewentshoppinginthebusystreets.what'smore,weeatlotsoffamousshanghaifoods:babaoduck,haoyoubeef,friedmantou,etc.whataunforgettablewacationforme!Iwouldliketovisititagaininmyfutureday!

　　去年夏天,我们一家人去上海度假--我爸,我妈和我.这真是个幸福的会回忆呀--晴天,热情好客的上海人,漂亮的景色和繁华的大街.我们待了一周.在这一周里,我们游玩了浦东、外滩、黄浦江、上海博物馆,等等.我们还去购物、吃了很多东西：八宝鸭、耗油牛肉、油炸馒头,等等.

　　真是个难忘的暑假啊、我想我将来还会再去一趟上海的!

　　虽然是过去式的不过你可以改改