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  第一节:短文改错(满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、

  第一节:短文改错(满分10分)

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  DearEditor,

  I'maseniorhighschoolstudent,namedLiHua.Nowadays,itwasfashionableforusstudentstohaveiPads.UsinganiPad,youcanlistentomusic,downloadlearningmaterials,andsoon.Obvious,itgreatlyhelpsusatourstudies.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,thatmakesteachersandotherstudentsgreatlyannoying.Someofthemevenwastetimeinclassplayvideogames.

  Inmyopinions,theclassroomisaplacetostudyin.Therefore,weshouldmakeagooduseofiPadstoimproveourstudies.Meanwhile,schoolsshouldmakesomerulesinstructthestudentstouseiPadsproperly.

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  DearEditor,

  I'maseniorhighschoolstudent,namedLiHua.Nowadays,it was fashionableforusstudentstohaveiPads.UsinganiPad,you canlistentomusic,downloadlearningmaterials,andsoon.Obvious,itgreatlyhelpsus at ourstudies.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,that makesteachersandotherstudentsgreatly annoying.Someofthemevenwastetimeinclass play videogames.

  Inmy opinions,theclassroomisaplacetostudyin.Therefore,weshouldmake a gooduseofiPadstoimproveourstudies.Meanwhile,schoolsshouldmakesomerules∧instructthestudentstouseiPadsproperly.

  详

  1.was改为is考查时态.根据句中副词Nowadays,要用一般现在时态.

  2.you改为we考查代词.根据前文中的us,要用代词we.

  3.Obvious改为Obviously考查副词,副词修饰句子,形容词obvious的副词是obviously.

  4.at改为with考查介词.help…with意为"帮助(某人)做(某事)",是固定搭配.

  5.that改为which考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which.

  6.annoying改为annoyed考查过去分词.根据句意:这使老师和其他学生非常恼怒.用过去分词作宾语补足语.

  7.play改为playing考查动名词.wastetime(in)doingsth.意为"浪费时间做某事",后动词时用动名词形式.

  8.opinions改为opinion考查固定搭配.inone'sopinion意为"依照某人的看法",是固定搭配.

  9.去掉a考查固定搭配.makegooduseof意为"很好利用",是固定搭配.

  10.rules后加to考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式表示目的,作目的状语.

2020-07-20 00:39:27

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