帮我改改英语作文LiYuchunismyfavoritestar.Sheisveryhandsome,butalsoverycute,therearemanypeoplelikeher.Iamoneofthem.Inthesummerof2005,Ihaveknownher.Shehasalittleface,herskinisverygood.Smalleyes,thinlips.She'

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　　LiYuchunismyfavoritestar.Sheisveryhandsome,butalsoverycute,therearemanypeoplelikeher.Iamoneofthem.Inthesummerof2005,Ihaveknownher.Shehasalittleface,herskinisverygood.Smalleyes,thinlips.She'saverygoodtyphoon,therearepowerfulvoices.Shedidnotlikethemake-up,donotliketocry.Shelikestoeat,wholikestosleep,buthowlongarenotfat.Herfavoritesongis"Autumnleave".Ialsolikethesong.Shehasalotofloveforher,shewasconcernedaboutthefans.Theyarecrazyandfervor.IlikeLiYuchun,butIjustquietlysupporther.Ibelieveshewillbesingingontheroadfurtherandfurtheraway.