短文改错Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotiredtowalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherestedunderabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhisshirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.hewasverytiredthathed

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　　Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotired

　　towalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherested

　　underabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhis

　　shirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.

　　hewasverytiredthathedidn'twakeupuntiltheevening.

　　hewasjustabouttojumpwhilehefeltsomethingmoving

　　nearhisfeet.Helookedupandsawalongblacksnake.

　　Jimwassofrighteningthathedidn'tdaretomove.The

　　snakebegantocrawlacrosshislegs.Itcrawledonand

　　onuntilitwasdisappearedundertherocks,Jimjumped

　　tohisfeet,pickeduphisshirtandrandowntheroad.