谁帮我做一下这个短文改错?Thereareadvangeforstudentstoworkwhilestudingatschool.Oneofthemwasthattheycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirownuse.Earingtheirownmoneyallowthemtospend
谁帮我做一下这个短文改错?
Thereareadvangeforstudentstoworkwhilestudingatschool.Oneofthemwasthattheycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirownuse.Earingtheirownmoneyallowthemtospendonanythingasiftheyplease.Theywouldhavetoasktheirparentsformoneyorforpermissiontodothingsbythemoney.Somestudentsmayalsotosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.