麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂Asweallkonw,thecollegeshaveopentheirsdo

　　麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误

　　本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂

　　Asweallkonw,thecollegeshaveopentheirsdoorswider,thisisagoodthing,itmakesmorechancesforpeopletostudyincollegeandrecievebettereducation.

　　Butatthesametime,thecolleges'openingtheirdoorswiderbringsomethingbadalso.Nowadays,enteracollegeismoreandmoreeasilythanbefore,itmeansthereismoreandmorecollegestudentinthesociety,beingacollegestudentisnotmeansderivingajob.Asthequalityofcollegestudentrisingsofastly,moreandmorecollegestudentcannotgetajob.

　　Inmyopinion,it'snodoubtthatcolleges'openingtheirdoorswiderisgoodfordevelopmentofsociety,butpeoplewhogetachanceofstudingincollegeshouldworkhardtoimprovehisablitysothathecangetajob.