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　　Asisapparentlyshowninthechartabove,manymiddleschoolstudentshaveproblemsbothphysicallyandmentally,with70%ofthestudentshavinglearninganxietyaswellaspooreyesight,andalargerpercentagelackingsleep.Comingnextisthelackofphysicalexercise.40%ofthestudentssurveyedwon’tobeytheirparentsorteachers.Inaddition,Stillfewerclaimnottohaveenoughcommunicationwithothers.

　　AsfarasIamconcerned,westudentsshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstudies.Justasasayinggoes:“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,”withoutasoundbody,onecannotachieveanything.However,toomuchattentionhasbeenpaidonlytostudies.Therefore,Isuggestwebegivenlesshomeworkandmoretimeforout-of-classroomactivitiestosolvealltheproblems.Onlyinthiswaycanweleadahappyandhealthylife