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  【雅思快考了上次作文5.拖了大后腿.顺便估个人分数吧Schoolsshouldteachstudentstheacademicsubjects,whicharehelpfulfortheirlife.Therefore,othersubjectssucharemusicandsportsarenotimportant.Towhatextentdoyouagr】

  雅思快考了上次作文5.拖了大后腿.顺便估个人分数吧

  Schoolsshouldteachstudentstheacademicsubjects,whicharehelpfulfortheirlife.Therefore,othersubjectssucharemusicandsportsarenotimportant.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

  Nowadaysthediscussionaboutwhethertheacademicsubjectsarefarmoreimportantthantheartsubjectsisunderdebate.Ibelievethestudyingacademicsubjectsareessentialforstudents`furtherdevelopment,butartsubjectsalsoplayaimportantroletohelpthestudentgrowheathily

  First,Imustadmitthatartsubjectsarenecessaryintheschoollife,suchasphysicaleducationinwhichstudentscanbuildthierbodyandlearntocooperatewiththeotherpeople.Duringthegame,studentsnotonlydoexercisesbutalsogainthesenseofwinningandlosing,whichisanessesityofsuccess.Whileinthepaintingclass,accordinglythestudentsareforsteredtheproceptionofbeautyandgoodtastes.Apparentlytheseartsubjectswillleadtothedecreaseoftheacadmiclearningtime,butasanoldsayinggoes,"AllstudynoplaymakeJackadull".Forachild,theadequateacknowledgeofartsubjectsisanecessityforhisorhermentalandphysicalhealth.

  Furthermore,havingartclassesisgivingthestudentswhohavespecialtalentandspecificinterestsaopportunitytoachievetheirdreams.Whattheparentsconcernsmostiswhethertheartsubjectstakessomuchtimethatthierchildrencannotgetagreatscoreinacademicsubjectstoenterahighereducationalinstitutionlikeacollegeoruniversity.However,realistically,almostalltheuniversitiesinchinafoundcollegeoffineartsandcollegeofphysicalculture.Thestudentshavegiftscanalsogettheentertickettothetopuniversitiesbyworkinghardonthespecificfieldthattheyfocuson.

  However,Iproposethattheacademicsubjectsstillplayairreplaceablepartinchildren`seducationalprogram.tobehonest,theacademiclessonscontainsabroaderrangeofinformationandknowledge.Thesesubjectscultivatestudents`abilityofcriticalthinkingandmemorizingabstractedconcepts,whichmotivatestheirintelligenceandimagination.Believeitornot,theyarethefoundationoflearningcapacity.Afterall,thestudentswhoaretalentedinartsorsportsistheminorityofthewh

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2020-07-25 08:32
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申加刚

  ...我又来看这篇了.给你点意见希望能帮到你.你既然说你看过写作书,就无法避免套一些句型,第一段第一句就是套的.我上过很长时间的环球雅思,每个老师都强调,写作一定要按照老外的思维习惯,就是中心思想明确,也就是说...

2020-07-25 08:35:40
陈任

  实在是太谢谢你的点评了。我的听力和阅读都过了,就是写作太差了,所以得继续考。那同学,这第一句怎么写能够脱离模板呢?您能给我点指点吗?如果是你,你觉得该怎样开头呢?麻烦你了!

2020-07-25 08:36:18

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