请帮忙改下英语作文口头发言Thesecretofsuccessinlifeisforamantobereadyforhisopportunitywhenitcomes.Success,maybeitisthemissionofeveryone'life.everybodywantstobesuccessful,butfewofthemcansucced.Whyistha

　　请帮忙改下英语作文口头发言

　　Thesecretofsuccessinlifeisforamantobereadyforhisopportunitywhenitcomes.

　　Success,maybeitisthemissionofeveryone'life.everybodywantstobesuccessful,butfewofthemcansucced.Whyisthat?Whatisthesecretofsuccess?

　　Thissentencegivesusananswer--bereadyfortheopportunityandcatchit.

　　First,bereadyfortheopportunitymeansthatyoushouldknowaboutyouraimabviously.Amanwithnoaimjustlikeashipwithnodestenation.Youknowaboutwhatyouwanttodo,andgoahead.

　　Second,attitudeisalsoakeytosuccess.Ifyousupposethatsuccessonlydepandsontheintellectualmindanddonotworkhardaiall,youarecompletelywrong.

　　Third,abilityisimportant,too.Butdon'tcarewhetheryouhaveitnow.Thiscanbeestablishedbyyourwork.Wewillgainalotofexperienceaswegrowup.

　　Noonewasbornwithangreatopportunity,butyoucancreateitbyyourself.Opportunitysonlyfindthosepeoplewhohasbeenreadytofaceit.

　　Andareyoureadyforsuccess?

　　万分感谢!