急请高手帮我看看这一小段英语(intrduce)有没有语法错误并帮我改正ThisisFlora,sheisfromChina,shehasbeenlivinginCanadaforninemonth.ButherparentslivinginChina.Shehasoneoldersisterandoneyoungerbrother.S
急请高手帮我看看这一小段英语(intrduce)有没有语法错误并帮我改正
ThisisFlora,sheisfromChina,shehasbeenlivinginCanadaforninemonth.ButherparentslivinginChina.Shehasoneoldersisterandoneyoungerbrother.Sheisnotmarried.ShelivesinVancouverwithherfriend.SheisstudyingEnglishinVCC,atnight.ShealsoworkfulltimeasapackerataTNTsupermarket,lifeisreallybusy,butsheenjoyreading,listeningtomusicandhangingoutwithfriendsinherfreetime.