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　　如果您有时间请帮我看看作文Inrecentyears,manyyoungpeopledecidetofurthertheirstudyabroad.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofstudyabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages?Everymorningweopenoureyes,wefoundthatweborninthisrapidly

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　　Inrecentyears,manyyoungpeopledecidetofurthertheirstudyabroad.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofstudyabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages?

　　Everymorningweopenoureyes,wefoundthatweborninthisrapidlychangingsociety,inparticular,intermsofworkingandstudyingetc.ifyouareanaficionadoofthestudyingabroad“debate”,youhaveprobablyreadatonetimeoranotherthatcurrenttrendsinthiscontroversyshowsthatthereistwoopinionsinthisquestion,whichistreathimastheangel,andotherindividualsthinkhimisthedemon.ThewayIseeit,Iamtotallyagreewiththispointwhichisthinkheistheangel.

　　Studyingabroadmaycreatesubstantialbenefits.Tobeginwith,thispracticecanhelpfosterastrongsenseofachievementinmanystudentswhentheyhadfulfilledtheirschoolwork.Secondly,itisnotunrealisticthatstudyingabroadcouldwidentheirknowledgeandbroadentheiroutlook.Technically,studyingabroadcouldbringfar-reachingeffectsforpeople‘slife.Lastbutnoleast,itisnotuncommonthatstudentsmaygainhighersalarywhentheycamebacktoChina.

　　Ontheotherhands,Chinaisacountrywhichisdevelopingallthetime.Sothatwhenwegosomedevelopedcountries[e.g,USA,UK,NASA]wemusttopayhigherfees.Forinstance,ifastudentcompletehishigh-educationinchina,hewillpaythefeesbetween$8000-$9000,yetifhefulfillhisuniversitytimeinUSA,thefeeswillbetween$100000-$120000.

　　Hegelsaid:whatisrationalisreal,andwhatisrealisrational.Thisshowsthatthereisanythinghasitsprofoundsignificance,buteverythinghastwosides,hasitsmerits,musthaveitsshortcomings.Wecomeinthisinformationexplosionofthecommunityneedstheobjectivedialecticalmaterialismweseethings,ifheismoregoodthanharm,topromotehim,andifmoreharmthangood,tolimithis.

　　Inthefinalanalysis,despiteofthenegativeeffectssuchashigherfees,Iamconvincedthatincitedstudentsstudyingabroadisintheinterestoftheindividualsandthesocietyasawhole,thanksalot.

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2020-08-02 19:22

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　　1.furthertheirstudyabroad

　　=>Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeopleinclinedtomakeuptheirmindstogoandstudyabroad.

　　2.Everymorningweopenoureyes,wefoundthatweborninthisrapidlychangingsociety,inparticular,intermsofworkingandstudyingetc.(汉语式英语)

　　=>Wehavewitnessedthatthesocietytakesrapidandsounddevelopmentcurrently,particularlyinscientificresearchandourworkingenvironment.

　　3.youhaveprobablyreadatonetimeoranotherthatcurrenttrendsinthiscontroversyshowsthatthereistwoopinionsinthisquestion,whichistreathimastheangel,andotherindividualsthinkhimisthedemon.（无法说是好坏,只能是个人观念中的优缺点吧）

　　=>youprobablyhaveread（感觉是这个语序吧）thecurrentdebatemanytimeswhichgoeslikethisasthecontroversydescribed,thatisagreatnumberofpeoplespeakhighlyofstudyingabroadwhilemanyonesopposedtoitseriously.

　　4.ThewayIseeit,Iamtotallyagreewiththispointwhichisthinkheistheangel.

　　=>However,frommypointofview,Iamtotallyagreewiththeformer.

　　5.Thereareseveralreasonstoaccountforthephenomenonanditwouldbeagreatbenefittous.(过度···)

　　6.Ontheotherhands,Chinaisacountrywhichisdevelopingallthetime.(没必要用从句吧,累赘,要不改一下··)

　　=>Ontheotherhands,It'swellknownthatChinahasbeencontinuouslydevelopinginrecentyears,

　　7.Sothatwhenwegosomedevelopedcountriese.g,USA,UK,NASA]wemusttopayhigherfees.（感觉主从顺序有点不舒服）

　　=>SothatwemustpayhigherfeeswhenwegosomedevelopedcountriessuchasUSA,UK,andNASA,

　　8.Thisshowsthatthereisanythinghasitsprofoundsignificance（意译,改进）

　　=>Itshowsustheconceptthateverythingismatchedwiththerealmeaningofitsexistence.However,Asapopularsayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,boththeperfectionandtheimperfection.

　　9.Wecomeinthisinformationexplosionofthecommunityneedstheobjectivedialecticalmaterialismweseethings（汉语式）

　　=>Iturgentlyrequiretheobjectivedialecticalmaterialisminthiseraofinformationexplosion···

　　只是个人观点···

　　总体感觉你汉语化有点严重,我都怀疑你是直接把中文放到网页或是软件上翻译的···这样改,还不如你给我汉语翻译的快呢··

　　像是：ifheismoregoodthanharm,topromotehim,andifmoreharmthangood,tolimithis.直接~

　　语序尤其是从句

2020-08-02 19:23:26

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