【帮我看看考研英语图表作文,大致能得到多少分.挑挑错误也行.判分问题请懂的再回答.不懂的可以帮我看看错误.Aswecanseefromthechart,averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhavewitn】

　　帮我看看考研英语图表作文,大致能得到多少分.

　　挑挑错误也行.判分问题请懂的再回答.不懂的可以帮我看看错误.

　　Aswecanseefromthechart,averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhavewitnessastronglysurgefrom2000to2005.Furthermore,intheperiod2005to2010,theincreaseratehavesteadybutslightlyslowbecame400%.Inmyopinion,therearetwomainreasonsforthisdramaticphenomenon.Fristandforemost,withtheglobeeconomysolidlyincrease,peopleindevelopingcountrygetasrichasdevelopedcountryare.Thereforetheycanaffordsomestuffwhichistooexpensiveforthembefore.Second,withscienceimproving,theelectricalfacilitieshavebecomemorecheaperthananytimeinhistory,especiallypersonalcomputer.Intermsofcommunicatebetweenindividuals,weallbenefitfromnewtechnologyimproving.However,ontheotherhand,weshouldnotignoretheproblemscomputerbringin.Asoneofourreliable“friends”,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestolimittimethatwespendwithcomputer.Onlybyenforcethis,asanindividual,canweembraceapromisingprospect.