在线检查英文写作错误和不当之处.Hi,Boysandgirls:Today,Iwilltalksomethingaboutopportunityandchallenge.Everyonewantstosucceed.Butasweknow,Alloftheirsuccesscameataprice.Beethovenwasoneofthegreatestmusician,buth

　　在线检查英文写作错误和不当之处.

　　Hi,Boysandgirls:

　　Today,Iwilltalksomethingaboutopportunityandchallenge.

　　Everyonewantstosucceed.Butasweknow,Alloftheirsuccesscameataprice.Beethovenwasoneofthegreatestmusician,buthewasdeaf;HelenKellerwasoneofthemostfamouswriter,butshewasdeafandblind;Edisonwasoneofthemostimportantinventor,buthewasdeaf,too.Despitethis,butstillnobodydoesn'twanttosucceed.Howcanwesucceed?Itneedsopportunity.Butalltheopportunitiesareaccompaniedwithchallengesthoughnotallthechallengewillmakeyousucceed.SoIthinksuccessisnotonlyneeddiligence,butalsoneedalittleluck.Edisoneversaid:"Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-nineperspiration."Theonepercentinspirationistheopportunity,itneedyouluckyenoughtomeetit.Butwhenyoumeetit,canyoucatchit?Andcanyouhavetheabilitytopassthechallenge?

　　MadameCuriecandothis.ShewasthefirstwomantowintwoNobelprizes.At1896,FrenchphysicistBecquerelfoundthatakindofuraniumsaltcanemitautomaticallyakindofunknownradiation.Thiswasheropportunity.Shethoughtthiswasanaturalphenomenon.Shedecidedtocheckalltheknownchemicalsubstance.AtlastshefoundtheradioactivityandwontheNobelPrizeforphysics.Butshewasn'tcontent.Shethoughtitisaunknownelementsinuraniumasphaltore.Thefactprovedthatshewasright,shefoundthepoloniuminJuly,1898.AndinDecember,shefoundtheradium.Butmanyscientistdidn'tbelieveit.TheysaidCurieshouldmeasurepoloniumandradium'satomicweight.Afterfouryearsofworkinghard,CuriefoundthepureradiumchlorideandwontheNobelPrizeforchemistry.

　　TherearemanychallengeandonlyoneopportunityatMadameCurie'slife.Shewaslookeddownuponbecauseshewasawoman.Allofherexperimentwasdangerousbecauseoftheradioactivesubstance.Andherhusbandwasdeadofaaccident.Butshehadnevergivenupandpassedalltheopportunity.Shewontentimesbonus,16piecesmedaland107honorarytitle.

　　Itisnoteasyforustosucceed.So,fromnowon,letusstudyhardandgatherexperience.Whentheopportunitycomes,tryyourbesttocatchitandpassthechallenge,youwillbethewinner!

　　Thatisallmyspeech,thankyou.