谁来给我批改一下英语作文?急~~~~Everybodyknows,thesocialintercourseisveryimportantinstudent’slife.Somepeoplethinkthatthesocialintercourseisabadideaeveryday.Thereasonsasthefollowing;1.Thesocialintercoursewill

　　谁来给我批改一下英语作文?急~~~~

　　Everybodyknows,thesocialintercourseisveryimportantinstudent’slife.Somepeoplethinkthatthesocialintercourseisabadideaeveryday.Thereasonsasthefollowing;

　　1.Thesocialintercoursewillwasteoftimeforthestudents.

　　2.Thesocialintercoursewillhurtthestudy.

　　Somepeoplethinkthatthesocialintercourseisagoodideaeveryday.Thereasonsasthefollowing:

　　1.Joiningsocialintercoursecancontactwithlotsofpeople.

　　2.Joiningsocialintercoursecanknowlotsofknowledge.

　　3.Joiningsocialintercoursecanbringhappy.

　　Ithinkthatthestudentscanjoinsocialintercourse,buttheymustjoininvacation.Itcan’twasteofstudent’stime,andthestudentswillhaveagoodtime.

　　急~~~改得好追加~~~~