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　　英文作文求检查MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommu

　　英文作文求检查

　　MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.

　　Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommunicatewithyourelder.Mygrandparentshadboughtsomecandyanddriedfruitsandhadputitontheplatebeforewecame.Whenyouarrived,youcouldwatchTVoreatingsnacks.

　　At8:00pm,begantelevisionprogram.Atthismoment,wehadbeenwatchingTVuntilnextdayearlyinthemorning.Duringthistime,youcouldn’tsleep,thisisChina’stradition.Whenwastwelveo’clock,everyonegavenewyear’sgreetingstohiselder.MycousinsandIshotofffirecrackersafterwards.Thenwehadbeeneatingdumplings.

　　有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!

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2020-08-04 09:11

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　　以下是我对您的作文的修改,仅供参考：

　　MyfamilyalwaysholdscelebrationsontheSpringFestival,foronthisday

　　allmembersofthefamilyarefree.

　　However,thecelebrationsarealitterbored.Sincetheoldandtheyoung

　　havedifferentpreferences,soitisdifficulttocommunicatewithoneanother.

　　Mygrandparentsusuallybuysomecandiesanddriedfruitsandputthemon

　　theplatesbeforewevisitthem.Whenwearriveattheirhome,wecanwatchTV

　　oreatsnacks.At8:00pm,theSpringFestivalGalaontheTVbegins.Then

　　wewatchtheTVprogramuntilearlynextdayinthemorning.Duringall

　　thistime,wecan’tfallasleep,althoughwesometimesfeelverysleepy.Thisis

　　theChinesetradition.Whentheclockstrikes12midnight,everyoneshould

　　sayNewYear’sgreetingstotheelderly.AfterwardsmycousinsandIset

　　offsomefirecrackers.Thenwealleatdumplings.

2020-08-04 09:15:15

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