大家帮我指正下我的作文的语法问题可以吗?Someonesaidthattheuniversityisfree,ifyouwanttolearn,youcangototheclass,onthecontrary,ifyoudon'twanttolearnyoucangocutclasstodowhatdoyoutodo.x0bButI'dlik

　　大家帮我指正下我的作文的语法问题可以吗?

　　Someonesaidthattheuniversityisfree,ifyouwanttolearn,youcangototheclass,onthecontrary,ifyoudon'twanttolearnyoucangocutclasstodowhatdoyoutodo.x0bButI'dliketosayis,youcometoschoolfirsttaskisreading,everylessonyouareontheparentscomebackwithmoney,notinclassiswasteoftheirmoney

　　AlthoughitwillbeOKifyoudon'tfailanysubjectsinuniversityx0bx0bOlderstudentswhohaveworkedinsocietysuggestthatonlywhenwestudyourspecializedknowledgewellcanwegetpromotedafterwefindourjobs

　　Personally,Ithink,loveisarequiredcourseinlife,youshouldtrythetasteoflovebeforegraduation

　　Asacollegestudents,weonlylivethreeyearswithtruefriends.x0bSo,don'tcherishthememoryofthelifeofuniversityaftergraduation