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　　Nowadays,distance-learningprogramsaresuchcommonthingforus(thestudymaterialbypast,byinterest),butsomepeoplearguethatcoursescanneverbetakenasgoodasthesebyattendingcollegeoruniversityinperson.

　　Nowadays,distance-learningprogramshavebecomecommonwaysoflearning.However, somepeoplearestilldoubtaboutthemandarguethat

　　remotelearningcoursescanneverachievebettereffectthanattendingcollegeor

　　universitytogetlecturesfacetoface.

　　Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(Thisisnotnecessaryasyouarenotmakingpresentationtoraiselisteners'attention)

　　deletethissentence.

　　Distance-learningispervasiveandpersuasiveforitsefficiencyandlowcost,whileinmostcounties,facetofacetaughtbyteachersisstillthemaintrendofstudy.

　　Althoughdistance-learningispervasiveandpersuasiveforitslow

　　cost,facetofacetaughtbyteachersisstill

　　themainformsoflearninginmanycountries.

　　Shouldwealterthemeansoflearningandreplacethetele-educationoftheclassroom?Frommostpeople,theanswerisdefinitelynoandsodoI.

　　Shouldwealterthemeansoflearningandreplacethetele-educationwithclassroomlecture?Formostpeople,theanswerisdefinitelyno,andformethesame.

　　(areyousureyouareinfavouroftele-education?readthefollowingparagraphes)

　　Tobeginwith,eventhoughwiththeadventofdistancelearning,morestudentscanstudyathomeandtheirschedulesbecomeflexibleduetotheycanbooktheclasstheyneed,teacherscanprovideuswithsomethingspecialwhichcannotbeobtainedbydistance-learning.

　　(Areyousureyoucomebacktotalkaboutthedisadvantagesoftele-education?)

　　Althoughmore

　　studentscanstayathometolearntheircoursesthroughreadingon-lineteachingmaterialandtheirschedulescanbeveryflexible,sometimetherearecertaindrawbacksasteacherscanprovideuswith

　　somethingspecialthatcannotbeobtainedbydistance-learning.

　　Frommyexperience,themattersIlearnfrommyteacherarenotonlyknowledge,butalsoabouthowtobeausefulsocialmember,howtoconfrontwithtroubles,howtocheerupevenwhenyoufailforthousandsoftimes.

　　Basedonmyexperience,IbelievewhatIlearnfrommyteacherarenotonly

　　purescientificknowledge,butalsotheknowledgeabouthowtogrowuptobecomeapersoncancontributetooursociety,howtoface dificulties,problemsandfailures,andhowtocheerupevenwhenyoufailforthousands

　　oftimes.

　　Allthethingabovecanonlybelearnedfromtheexperiencewegetalongwithourteacher.

　　Alltheabovementionedcanbebetterlearnedbyattendingfacetofacelecturebecauseyouhavemorechancetolearnbyobservingteachers'work,thewaysandattitudetheydealwithothers.

　　Moreover,wearealsoinfluencedgraduallybyteachers.

　　Socratesgeneratedthenovelphilosophythinkingfromhisteacher,Pluto.

　　Socratesgotthenovelphilosophythinkingbasedonhislearningfromhisteacher,Pluto.

　　KingAlexanderlearnedthewaytomanageacountryfromAristotle.

　　Allthecelebritieshaveateacherwhocanenlightentheirmindandbecometheirguider,partner.

　　Allthecel

　　sincemyanswerconcernsaboutthestatementisIdon'twantthetele-educationreplacethestatusofformalschooling,thereforeforthethisquestion,myanswerisno.

　　Youarewelcome.Itshouldbe:Iappreciateyourhelpverymuch.Goodluckwithyourstudy.