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求大神帮忙修改这篇作文(英语)UnforgettabledayChineseNewyearinaparticularyear,myfamilyandIwentshopping.Weboughtalotofthings,suchasicecream,popcorn,oranges,milkandbread.Momgavemeboughtalotoftoys.Afterthatw
求大神帮忙修改这篇作文(英语)
Unforgettableday
ChineseNewyearinaparticularyear,myfamilyandIwentshopping.
Weboughtalotofthings,suchasicecream,popcorn,oranges,milkandbread.Momgavemeboughtalotoftoys.
Afterthatwewenttothezoo.Iseealotofanimals,funnymonkeys,lionsisterrible,verycutehamsters.
Weatelunchunderatree.Mydadtoldusalotofjokes.Veryinteresting.
Reallymemorableday
我承认写的很差劲,希望大家帮我修改下
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2020-08-04 18:47