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  帮我改改英语作文挑错就行都是日记ResolutionMydearwintervacation!Totellyouthetruth,I’mreallyfedupwiththelifefullofhomework!Asforstudy,Ihavenooptionbuttoagree.theholidayarrivedAtlast!Therefor,I’mgoingto

  帮我改改英语作文挑错就行

  都是日记

  Resolution

  Mydearwintervacation!

  Totellyouthetruth,I’mreallyfedupwiththelifefullofhomework!Asforstudy,Ihavenooptionbuttoagree.theholidayarrivedAtlast!Therefor,I’mgoingtotakeatriptoChengdeMountainResort.

  Thatisaplaceofhistoricinterest,Qianlongalwayswenttheretospendthesummer.Thecommonpeoplewerenotallowedtogothereatthattime,butnow,thingsaredifferent!

  Asanemperor,hehastodosomuchthings,buthealsohastimetorelax,hismotherwillnotaskhimtostudyorwork!Wehavelessresponsbilitythanhim,weareyoungerthanhim,so,whynotgiveustherighttoenjoyourselves?Thatcannotchangebyme,I’mnottheemperorafterall.

  Closemyeyesnow,Iwish,mytripwillbefantastic.

  Mytrip

  I’minChengdenow.

  Ihadjustcamebackfromchengdemountainresort.

  Actually,thiswasadevelopingcity.Allthehouseswererenovated,IbelievedthatthiscitywouldcoveredwithtallbuildingsandbecomeasbustlingasBeijingsomeyearslatter.

  ThisplacewasnotasamusingasIexpected,Irememberedthatitwashotterthananyotherplaces,Wekeptonwalkingforanhourtillwereachedtheexit.SoonIfoundthatIdidn’tfeelhotanymore!Ithoughtthereasonwasthatthereweresomanypeople!

  Anyway,thatwasnotanagreeabletrip,Iwasextremelydisappointedinit.

  Dochores

  Tomorrowisthespringfestival.Thesedays,mylittlecousinstayedatmyhomeanddidn’tleaveuntilyesterday.Myhousehadbecameverydirtybecauseofher.Somyparentsdecidedtohaveaspring-cleaning.

  Mymotheraskedmetocleanthelivingroomandmyownbedroom.Thatwasunfairbecauseboththelivingroomandthebedroomwereverylarge.ButIhavenooptionbuttostarttowork.Iputallthesundriesintoabigcupboard,inthiswaythehousehadbecamecleanandtidy.Mymotherwassatisfiedwithmywork.

  AlthoughIfoundasimplewaytofinishthat“spring-cleaning”,Istillfeltterriblytired.Iwishthatmymotherwouldnotopenthatcupboard!

  Thecinema

  TodaywasthefirsttimethatIwenttothatcinema.Becauseanewfilmnamed“”wasshown.

  Thereisacinemainourcommunitynamed”S

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2020-08-04 07:24
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刘亚清

  Therefor后面丢个E,

  Asanemperor,hehastodosomuchthings,buthealsohastimetorelax,hismotherwillnotaskhimtostudyorwork这里应该用过去时.

  Mytrip这部分时态有点乱,既然后面都是在叙述过去的事,第一句话也应用过去时.

  Dochores这部分也是这样.ButIhavenooptionbuttostarttowork.这句应该用过去时.

  Thecinema这部分整个第二段都是叙述过去的电影院吧?既然下面用现成时说它不再神秘,这段显然是过去的,该用过去时.

  最后那句该用现在完成时.

  ————————————————

  整体来说表达不错的,唯一要注意的是时态.你再仔细斟酌一下.

2020-08-04 07:26:57

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