【这篇英语作文有什么错误?题目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母让你取得好成绩吗？你父母让你交朋友么？请以IfIwereafather/mother为题，写一篇作文作文：IfIwereafather】

　　这篇英语作文有什么错误?

　　题目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母让你取得好成绩吗？你父母让你交朋友么？请以IfIwereafather/mother为题，写一篇作文

　　作文：

　　IfIwereafather

　　Weallmustbefathersormothersinthefuture.IfIwereafatherhowshouldItreatmykids?Hereismyidea

　　IfIwereafatherIwouldteachmykidalotiftruth.Forexample,Iwouldteachmykidtobehappyallthetime,toreagrddifficultyaschallenge,tobeatalltheproblems……IfIwereafatherIwouldmakefriendswithmykid,Iwouldplaygameswithit,Iwouldkeepithealthy,andgrowingfast.IfIwereafather,Iwouldn'tmakeitgetsogoodgrades,butitisnotallowedtocopyothers.AlsoIwouldhelpittomakealotsoffriends.

　　IbelieveifIwereafather,Iwouldbeverygood