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　　日期

　　Todaywasaveryspecialday.Becausemyfamilywenttotheparkandhadapicnictogether.WetookNo.xxbustogotthere.

　　Weflewthekiteandplayedwithourdog.Wefeltverytiredandsleepy.So,weputthecanvasonthegrassandpreparedforthepicnic.

　　Therewerelotoffoodonthecanvas,suchasapples,strawberries,chips,bread,milk,orangejuiceandcocacola.Myfatherusedtohavebread,butthenheatesomebread.Mymotheratesomestrawberriesbecauseshewantedtokeepslimshape.Iateapacketofchips,becauseitwasverycrispy.Ourdogateabigappleandabarofbread.Ourdogwasverylovely,wasn'tit?

　　Wehadagoodtimetoday.We'llhaveapicnicagainsoon.