求英语达人看看我写的这段文章有没有语法和拼写错误.《BendingtheWillow:JeremyBrettasSherlockHolmes》——ThemirroroutsideisSherlockHolmesHesaid”Well,Ihaveatradeofmyown.IsupposeIamtheonlyoneinthewo

　　求英语达人看看我写的这段文章有没有语法和拼写错误.

　　《BendingtheWillow:JeremyBrettasSherlockHolmes》

　　——ThemirroroutsideisSherlockHolmes

　　Hesaid”Well,Ihaveatradeofmyown.IsupposeIamtheonlyoneintheworld.I’maconsultingdetective.”

　　Hesaid“MynameisSherlockHolmes.It’smybusinesstoknowwhatotherpeopledon’tknow.”

　　ThefirsttimeIsawyouonthescreen.ThefirsttimeIunderstoodyouinthebooks.ThefirsttimeImissedyouinmyheartandusemywholelifetorememberyou.

　　AlthoughyouhavebeendeadforsixteenyearswhenIfirstknewyou.Ican’treducemyloveforyou.Becauseyouareknowntobethebest"SherlockHolmes"actor.Youconnectedthevirtualandreal.It’syou,mydearJeremy.YouaretheconnectorofmeandSherlock.

　　Ican’tdescribemyfeelingaboutyou.Youlikeamaninthemirror.

　　Outsidethemirror,youareHolmes.

　　Insidethemirror,youareJeremyBrett,youaremyfantasy.

　　Butyouaremyrealityaswell.

　　Itouchthemirrorframeslowly;Ican’tletmyfingerprintdirtyyourvirtualimageinthemirror.

　　Istandinfrontofthemirror.ButIcan’tfeelyourenergy.Ineverfeelthat.

　　Iwanttojoinyou.WithyouandWatsonadventurestogether.

　　Iwanttojoinyou.Withyouandyourwifehaveapicniconthegrass.

　　Nomatterinoroutofthemirror.

　　Youalwaysbemyhero.

　　NowyouareinheavenandIamintheworld.

　　NowyouarevirtualimageandIamentity.

　　JeremyBrettandSherlockHolmes.

　　Inthemirrorandoutofthemirror.

　　Youarealwaysinmyheart.