TommyisamemberofmyteamcalledMoonlight．Heisa15-year-oldstudentinGradeNine．Hehasmanystrongqualities，suchasbeingclever，generous，andhelpful．（聪明、大方、乐于助人）HeisnotonlyfondofreadingdetectivestoriesbutalsolikesTVprogramsaboutsportsnews．【高分句型一】（不仅喜欢看侦探小说而且喜欢看关于体育新闻的电视节目．）Sincethisterm，hehasdevotedmostofhisefforttostudying．Asaresult，hehasmadegreatprogress（自从本学期他把绝大部分精力投放到学习中，他取得了很大进步）Besides，hesucceededinhelpingDetectiveLusolveakidnappingcase．OurschoolpresentedhimwithAwardforBraverythisyear．（他成功地帮助Detective Lu解决了绑架的案子．今年，学校授予了他见义勇为奖）

　　However，Tommyisalsofacingsomeproblemsofourage．Foronething，hesuffersfromstresswhenevertheexamiscoming．Foranother（thing），hedoesn'thaveenoughsleep．（面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠．）

　　Asforhisproblems，I'dliketoofferhimsomeadvice．First，heshouldgooverwhathehaslearnedbeforeexams．Second，it'sbetterforhimtomanagehistimewiselysothathecanhaveenoughtimetorest．【高分句型二】（建议）