【求修改语法病句!Doyouknowwhatkindsofskillsyouhavetodevelop,ifyoulivinginaforeigncountry?ThesisStatement:Livinginaforeigncountry,itisimportanttolearnhowtocookbyyourselfifyoudon’tfitthefoodinforeigncountry】

　　求修改语法病句!

　　Doyouknowwhatkindsofskillsyouhavetodevelop,ifyoulivinginaforeigncountry?

　　ThesisStatement:

　　Livinginaforeigncountry,itisimportanttolearnhowtocookbyyourselfifyoudon’tfitthefoodinforeigncountryandhowtomakefriendswithinternationalfriends.

　　TopicSentence1:

　　Cookbyyourselfandkeepabalancedietaregoodforyouhealth.

　　TopicSentence2:

　　Youcanlearnmanythingswhatyoudon’tknowfrominternationalfriendsanditcanenrichourlifeandbroadenouroutlook.

　　Conclusion(

　　Foreigncountrieshaveadifferentwayoflifefromours,weneedtoobservecarefullyandlearnsomethingwedon’tknow.Ihopeallthosewhoarestudyingabroadcanlivingwellintheforeigncountry.