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　　【帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有错误,明天考试了,跪谢Becauseofthegrowingeconomy,jobstressbecomeaverycommonthingtotheyoungpeople.Itaffectsnotonlyourworkingbutalsoourdailylife.Howcanwepreventthejobstress?】

　　帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有错误,明天考试了,跪谢

　　Becauseofthegrowingeconomy,jobstressbecomeaverycommonthingtotheyoungpeople.Itaffectsnotonlyourworkingbutalsoourdailylife.

　　Howcanwepreventthejobstress?Firstofall,payattentiontothechangesonourmood,thepatternsofourlifeandourjobperformancetoascertainifweareunderjobstress.Second,findaproperbalancebetweentheworkandourpersonallife,trynottospendplentyofourtimeonworkingafterwork..Third,keepthedeskorganizedandputsomefamilyphotosorpottedflowersonitinsteadofthestacksofthefile.Likethesayinggoes——outofsight,outofmind.

　　Therearealsothreepiecesofadviceofhowtodealwiththejobstress.Firstly,getalongwellwithourcolleagues.Cooperatingwiththemwillshareyourpressure.Andtheharmoniousenvironmentwillcalmtheimpetuousheart.Second,thegoalscaneasytocompletebyseparatingthemintomanysections.Thirdly,whenwefeelstressful,wemaytrytopunchingthepillows,shoutingordoinghighintensityexercisetoventoutthepressure.

　　Ibelievethatifwetreatthestressinacorrectway,itwillfinallyturnintoaimpetustotakeustoabetterplaceatwork!

　　有的话请帮我改下,谢谢了

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2020-08-08 15:45

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　　Becauseofthegrowingeconomy,jobstressbecome(要加"s"))averycommonthingto(去掉the)youngpeople.Itaffectsnotonlyour(working改为works)butalsoourdailylife.

　　Howcanweprevent(去掉the)jobstress?Firstofall,payattentiontothechanges(on改为of)ourmood(加"s"),thepatternsofourlifeandourjobperformancetoascertainifweareunderjobstress.Second(加ly),findaproperbalancebetween(thework改为works)andourpersonallife,trynottospend(plenty改为toomuch)ofourtimeonworkingafterwork..Third(ly),keepthedeskorganizedandputsomefamilyphotosorpottedflowersonitinsteadofthestacksofthefile.Likethesayinggoes——outofsight,outofmind.

　　Therearealsothreepiecesofadviceofhowtodealwith(去掉the)jobstress.Firstly,(加tryto)getalongwellwithourcolleagues.Cooperatingwiththemwillshareyourpressure.Andtheharmoniousenvironmentwillcalmtheimpetuousheart.Second(ly),thegoalscan(加bemore)easytocompletebyseparatingthemintomanysections.Thirdly,whenwefeelstressful,wemaytryto(punching改为punch或去掉to)(去掉the)pillows,shoutingordoinghighintensityexercisetoventoutthepressure.

　　Ibelievethatifwetreat(去掉the)stressinacorrectway,itwillfinallyturninto(去掉a)impetus(totakeustoabetterplaceatwork改为andwouldmakeourworksmoreenjoyable!)

2020-08-08 15:49:24

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