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  【帮批改一下这篇英语作文Today,thereisnoconsensusyetonwhetherintelligentstudentsshouldbetaughtasanindependentgroupandbeeducatedseparately.Inthisessay,Iwillcompareandcontrasttwoperspectivesonthisissue.Personally,I】

  帮批改一下这篇英语作文

  Today,thereisnoconsensusyetonwhetherintelligentstudentsshouldbetaughtasanindependentgroupandbeeducatedseparately.Inthisessay,Iwillcompareandcontrasttwoperspectivesonthisissue.Personally,Iaminfavorof“brainystudentsshouldbedistinguishedfromothers”.

  Somearguethatteachingbrightstudentsdistinctlycarriescertainbenefits.Theymaypointoutdoingsoenablesstudentstoavoidthewasteofhumanresource.Forinstance,intelligentstudentshaveahighIQthatcanlearnfasterthanothers;theycanonlygetalittleknowledgeiftheyaretaughtwithothers.Also,itisgenerallyacceptedthateffortstoschoolcleverstudentsseparatelyhelpintelligentstudentstobetterreceiveknowledgethattheyhadneverlearned.Moreover,itisdifferentthateverystudent,wecannotusethesamemeasuretoschoolthem.Mostimportantly,thefactthateducatingdistinctlycanaffordthestudentssuitableknowledgemakesthisviewevenmorecompelling.Apparently,teachingstudentsseparatelyandpersonallycanbeverystimulatingifitisforlearninginsteadofjustforteachingeasily.

  Someothermaythinkthereshouldbenodifferencebetweenintelligentstudentsandnormalstudents,theyshouldnotbeeducatedseparately.Itistruethatweshouldhavenodiscrimination,studentsareallstudents.Itisentirelypossiblenormalstudentswouldbecomedisappointandwearinessofstudyiftheyweretreatedunfairly.But,asAlbertEinsteinsaid,“thegreatestindangerinmoderntechnologyisnotthatmachinesbegintothinklikepeople,butthatpeoplebegintothinklikemachines.”Thesameeducationmakestudentssame.Ourownexperienceinformsusstudentsshouldbetreateddifferentlybecausetheyaredifferent.

  Overall,myconclusionisthatsomestudentswhomareintelligent,weshouldteachthedifferentfromtheothernormalstudents,anduseasuitablemeasure.AsJohnF.Kennedyaptlyremarked,“Achildmiseducatedisachildlost.”

  有没有什么语法错误,或用词不当的地方,

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  Today,thereisnoconsensusyetonwhetherintelligentstudentsshouldbetaughtasanindependentgroupandbeeducatedseparately.

  (grouporbe……)

  Somearguethatteachingbrightstudentsdistinctlycarriescertainbenefits.("brings"isabetterwordthan"carries")

  Theymaypointoutdoingsoenablesstudentstoavoidthewasteofhumanresource.(pointoutthatbydoingsoenablestheeconomytoavoidthewastageof……)

  intelligentstudentshaveahighIQthatcanlearnfasterthanothers;theycanonlygetalittleknowledgeiftheyaretaughtwithothers.(……withhighIQcan……;……getlittleknowledge……)

  Also,itisgenerallyacceptedthateffortstoschoolcleverstudentsseparatelyhelpintelligentstudentstobetterreceiveknowledgethattheyhadneverlearned.(……generallyaccoknowledgedthatseparatingthecleverstudendsfromtherestintheeducationalcoursecanhelpthemlearnatafasterrateandhencereceivingmoreknowledge)

  Moreover,itisdifferentthateverystudent,wecannotusethesamemeasuretoschoolthem.(Moreover,everystudentisuniqueandwecannotusethesameteachingmethodtoeducatethem.)

  Mostimportantly,thefactthateducatingdistinctlycanaffordthestudentssuitableknowledgemakesthisviewevenmorecompelling.(Mostimportantly,thefactthateducatingeachstudentindividuallycanhelpdevelophisorheruniquestrengthandtalentmakesthisviewmoreconvincing.)

  Apparently,teachingstudentsseparatelyandpersonallycanbeverystimulatingifitisforlearninginsteadofjustforteachingeasily.

  (Apparently,teachingstudentsseparatelyandpersonallycanbeverybeneficialforthepurposeoflearning)

  Someothermaythinkthereshouldbenodifferencebetweenintelligentstudentsandnormalstudents,theyshouldnotbeeducatedseparately.(However,somemaythinkthatthereisnomuchdifferences……,andthustheyshouldnot……)

  Itistruethatweshouldhavenodiscrimination,studentsareallstudents.(……thatweshouldnothavediscriminationtowardsthetalentedandthelesstalented.Theyhaveequalrightsofbeingeducated.)

  Itisentirelypossiblenormalstudentswouldbecomedisappointandwearinessofstudyiftheyweretreatedunfairly.(Thelesstalentedstudentsmaybediscouragediftheyreceiveunfairtreatmentineduication.)

  But,asAlbertEinsteinsaid,“thegreatestindangerinmoderntechnologyisnotthatmachinesbegintothinklikepeople,butthatpeoplebegintothinklikemachines.”(Yet,AlbertEinsteinhassaid……)

  Ourownexperienceinformsusstudentsshouldbetreateddifferentlybecausetheyaredifferent.(Ourownexperienceteachesusthat……)

  Overall,myconclusionisthatsomestudentswhomareintelligent,weshouldteachthedifferentfromtheothernormalstudents,anduseasuitablemeasure.(Inconclution,thetalentedshouldbetoughtdifferentlyusingsuitableteachingmethod.)

  Plsimproveyourexpression.

2020-08-08 19:21:35

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