请帮忙看一下我写的这段英语有没有语法错误.x05TellmeaboutyourcityWellasyoucanprobablyguessIcomefromHarbinandIlivedhereallmylife.Infact,Ineverleavemyhometownexcepttravel.IsupposeifIhadtodescribeHarb

　　请帮忙看一下我写的这段英语有没有语法错误.

　　x05Tellmeaboutyourcity

　　WellasyoucanprobablyguessIcomefromHarbinandIlivedhereallmylife.Infact,Ineverleavemyhometownexcepttravel.IsupposeifIhadtodescribeHarbin,thefirstthingIwouldsayisthattheweatherofwinterisabsolutelycoldandthesummeralwayscoolbuttooshort.MaybeevenithasthelowestaveragetemperatureamongalloftheChineseprovincialcapitalsIguess.It’ssocoldthattheSonghuaRiverwhichgoesthroughourcitywillfreezeaboutfivemonths.ButanotherpointIcouldaddisthatthankstothewinter,itmakesmyhometownfamousforiceandsnow.Thegovernmentbuildsiceengravingandsnowsculpturetoestablishalarge-scaleamusementparkinordertoattracttourists.AndIshouldn’tforgettomentionthatoneofmyhometown’ssignificantcharacteristicisthatRussianandJapanesearchitecturesandcobblestonestreets.Actually,itishardlytoseeatothercities.