【我的这篇英语值日报告有多少错误?helloeveryone!thenewsemesterhascomenow,ihopeeveryonecanstudyharderandgetgoodgradesthisyear.todayiamonduty.first,letusplayagame.therearefivepredictionsaboutfivestudent'dream】

　　我的这篇英语值日报告有多少错误?

　　helloeveryone!thenewsemesterhascomenow,ihopeeveryonecanstudyharderandgetgoodgradesthisyear.todayiamonduty.first,letusplayagame.therearefivepredictionsaboutfivestudent'dreamintenyear,theyare.andiwillasksomestudentsthatwhowroteit,andbeforeyouguess,iwillreadthispaper,butyoucan'tlookthem.(经过.）,then,ihavesomeproblemswanttoaskyou.(whichmonthhave28days?whoworksonlyonedayinayearbutnevergetsfired?SantaClaus.WhydidlittleTomputhisbrother'sguitarintherefrigeratorBecauseheenjoyedcoolmusic)todayismonday,marchseventh.theweatherisalittlecool.wearegoingtolearnunit2today.mydutyisover.finallyihopeeveryonecanhaveagoodtimeeveryday.thankyou!我还是个新手,如有太多错误,请多多包含,且细心指教下.