No one lives without a dream．Whether the path is smoothly or tough，we are on the path to achieving it．As a senior 3student，I have the same dream like my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university．In the past three years，I have done everything I can∧equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers．Not only have I enjoy the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream．Anxiety and pressure discourage him now and then．Therefore，with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates，I think I'll make out it．I'm sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream．No matter how challenged it is，I'll make it come true．As the proverb says，"Where there has a will，there's a way．"

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　　1．smoothly改为smooth；考查形容词．系动词is后接形容词构成系表结构．

　　2．like改为as；考查介词．The same as是固定搭配，表示"同样的"．

　　3．can后加to；考查不定式．I can是插入语，可以省略不提，此处用不定式短语做目的状语，一位"我所做的一切事情都是为了装备我自己"．

　　4．that改为what；考查名词性从句．这里what引导宾语从句并充当从句的宾语，that只起连接作用．文意是我向老师学习来装备我自己．

　　5．enjoy改为enjoyed；考查动词．当not only放在句首时要使用半倒装结构，即助动词前提，正常句序为Ihaveenjoyedthepleasureofstudy．

　　6．him改为me；考查人称代词．文中人称代词使用错误，文中全文使用的是第一人称．文意是压力正在不时地使我感到泄气．

　　7．Therefore改为However；考查转折连词．结合上下文分析两句前后是转折关系，故用转折连词however．

　　8．去掉out；考查介词．Make out是固定搭配，表示"理解"，make本身可意为"实现，完成"．文意是在老师和同学们的鼓励下，我相信我能克服它．

　　9．challenged改为challenging；考查分成作形容词，主语是it，故用现在分词形式．文意是无论多么困难，我都将实现我的梦想．

　　10．has改为is；考查谓语动词．Where there is a will，there's a way．是谚语，表示"有志者事竟成"，陈述的是一般事实，所以用一般现在时态即可．