求英语大神帮我修改下作文‍IhavebeenlookingforwardtovisitingBeijing,IalwayswantedtogotoBeijingtovisittheImperialPalace,theGreatWallandsoon,mydreamcametrueinthesummer.it'sareallywonderfulexperienc

　　求英语大神帮我修改下作文

　　‍IhavebeenlookingforwardtovisitingBeijing,IalwayswantedtogotoBeijingtovisittheImperialPalace,theGreatWallandsoon,mydreamcametrueinthesummer.it'sareallywonderfulexperiencetravelinginBeijing.SopleaseallowmetointroduceBeijing.ItookaflighttoBeijingwithmyparents,Beijingcityhasalargepopulation,andthesubwayisbadlycrowded,however,wearestillexcited.First,wewenttotheImperialPalace,theImperialPalaceisbeautifulaswellasgrand.Theancientemperorsmusthavebeenverypleaedwiththelivesherewhichwerecomfortableenough,wetookalotofphotoswithmyparents,andthenwewenttotheGreatWall,theGreatWallisnotbig,It’shuge.,What’smore,weatelunchintheGreatWall,suchasBeijingroastduck,riceandotherdeliciousfoods,Beijingroastduckisverydelicious,mymomanddadlikeBeijingroastduckverymuch.AndwewenttoTiananmensquare,TheTiananmenisverygrand,Intheevening,wewenttoWangfujingstreet,withmanypeopleonthestreet,andthegoodsthatareveryexpensive,butwealllikeit,wealsoateBeijingsnacksthatistasty.Andtheend,weenteredtothehotel,wefeelverytired,wesleptearly.Iwasveryhappy,Ilearnedalotofthings,Andit'smyfirsttimetotakeaplane,IhopeyoucanalsovisittheChinesecapital,Beijing.Ibelieveyouwillbesurprised.