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  WhenIwasinelementaryschool,Ididbadlyinatest.SoIfeltverydisappointed.Iapersonsatintheroomcryanddidn'ttalktoanyone.Mymothercomfortedintheoutside,butIstillfeltverysad.Afewhourslater,IstoppedcryingandIunde

  WhenIwasinelementaryschool,Ididbadlyinatest.SoIfeltverydisappointed.Iapersonsatintheroomcryanddidn'ttalktoanyone.Mymothercomfortedintheoutside,butIstillfeltverysad.Afewhourslater,IstoppedcryingandIunderstoodthatitisnousecryingyesterday.SoIwenttothelivingroomandchattedwithmymotherforawhile.AndthenIwenttothemovies,readbooksanddidsportswithmyfriends.Finally,Ifeltmuchbetter.

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2020-08-10 07:23
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范晓峰

  1、首先elementary改为primary要好一些;2、Iapersonsatintheroomcryanddidn'ttalktoanyone.你这是典型的中文式英语,改为Iwascryingintheroomanddidn'ttalktoanyone.3、comforted后要有宾语,...

2020-08-10 07:25:44

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