【这是我写的英语读后感请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误ReadingafterTheWonderfulWizardofOzTherewasagirlcalledDorothyandsheisalovelygirlwithlongredhair.Becauseofacyclone,shestartedherinteresting】

　　这是我写的英语读后感请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误

　　ReadingafterTheWonderfulWizardofOz

　　TherewasagirlcalledDorothyandsheisalovelygirlwithlongredhair.Becauseofacyclone,shestartedherinterestingadventureswithherdogToto.Shemadefriendswithatinman,ascarecrowandalion.Herfriendshaddifferentweakpoints.Thelionisacoward,thescarecrowisnotcleverandthetinmanhadnoheart.ButDorothyhelpedthemandatlast,theygoteverythingtheywant.Thestoryisexciting,andIlikeDorothybest.Becausesheisbrave.Shewasnotafraidofthelion.Thoughthelionismuchbiggerandstrongerthanher.Ithinksheisalsokind.Shewaskindtoeveryonearoundher,especiallyherfriends.That’sthereasonwhytheycangetwhattheywantatlast.Alloftheirdreamscametrueandtheywereveryhappy.TheytriedtheirbesttohelpeachotherinthewaytotheEmeraldCity.It’sahappyendingandIthinkDorothyandherfriendwillneverforgettheexperiences.SodoI.