【本科毕业论文,老师批注了不少有问题的句子,可是我自己写的有些改不出来,想请英语高手帮我看看.Inthisthesis,Imakeacomparativeanalysis,focusingonsameanimalwordshavingthesameordifferentconnotationsin】

　　本科毕业论文,老师批注了不少有问题的句子,可是我自己写的有些改不出来,想请英语高手帮我看看.

　　Inthisthesis,Imakeacomparativeanalysis,focusingonsameanimalwordshavingthesameordifferentconnotationsinthetwocultures,anddifferentanimalwordshavesimilarculturalconnotations,andtheanimalwordsonlyhaveoneconnotationoftwolanguages.

　　Thelivingenvironmentforhumanissomewhatsimilar,allnationsliveinoneearth,facetothesamechallengefromthenature,ourcommonhumanitymakeshumanreachaconsensusabouttheobjectiveworld,thecommonfeelingsofpeopleintheactuallifeandproductivelabormadebothinEnglishandChineselanguagehasalotofthesameanimalimages.

　　Chinaisanagriculturalcountry,peoplemainlyuseoxtoploughtheland,buttheBritishusehorses,“ox”and“horse”areallreferto“strong”.

　　Forexample,cathasrichandvariedculturalconnotationsinEnglish,becausewesternpeoplelovescatasapetverymuch,theyknowmuchhabitsandcharacteristicsaboutcat,sotheymakemanyidiomsandproverbsabout“cat”toexpresstheirfeelingsandunderstandingofdifferentpeople,fromcommonpeopletobadwomen.

　　上面都是整个都被批注有问题的句子,语法我一团糟,所以都不怎么看的出来,请高手们帮我改改~