我是应届毕业生，就读于XXXXX。在校期间，因成绩优异，获得学院三等奖学金。

　　I'mafreshgraduates,enrolledinXXXXX.Duringschool,becauseofexcellentresults,obtainedcollegethird-classscholarship.

　　在大一时担任副班长一职，这使我的组织领导能力和团队协作能力得到锻炼，并获得了辅导员的赞赏。

　　Inthebigmomentasdeputymonitorajob;itmakesmyorganization,leadershipabilityandtheteamcooperationabilitygetexercise,andacquiredacounselor'sadmiration.

　　绝对正确

　　I'mthisyear'sgraduate,studyingat.......University.I'vegotscholarshipsformygoodgrades.Iwasamonitorinmyfirstyearofcollege.Itwasagoodchancetoimprovemyleadershipandspiritofteamwork.Igotgreatpraisesfromteachers.

　　MynameisXXX,IgraduatedfromXXXXthisyear.

　　Iwasawardedathird-classscholarshipbecauseofmyhardwork.

　　whenIwasafreshman,Iworkedasavice-monitor,whichmademeagoodleaderandteamplayer.Iwasgreatedpraisebymyinstructor.

　　我当年也为这愁了好久~~