我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?Now,Thankstomoreandmoretreesarebeingcutdown.Environmentbecomebad.Wehavetoprotectenvironment.Weshoudgotoschoolbybikeanddoshoppingbyclothbag.Don'tuse

　　我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?

　　Now,Thankstomoreandmoretreesarebeingcutdown.Environmentbecomebad.Wehavetoprotectenvironment.Weshoudgotoschoolbybikeanddoshoppingbyclothbag.Don'tuseplasticbays.Don'tthrowaroundanddomorecleaning.Plantingtreesisveryimportanttoprotect.Ifwecandoiteveryday.Ourworldwillbecomebeautiful.（本人初三水平）各位英语大仙帮我看看有什么错误?帮我指出来?