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  【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处】

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词.

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  Asthesayinggoes,timeismoney.Butinmyopinion,timeisevenpreciousthanmoney.Why?Becausewhenmoneyisspent,westillhaveachancetoearnthemback.Butwhentimeiswasting,wecannevergetitback.Thereissomedoubtthattimeisverylimited,andevenaminuteisofgreatvaluable.Weshouldmakefulluseoftimetodothatshouldbedone.It'sthepitythatalotofpeoplestilldidn'tappreciatethevalueoftime.Theyarewastingtheirtimedoingnothingofuseful.Weshouldformthegoodhabitofraceagainsttimeandmakeadifferenceinourworld.

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  Asthesayinggoes,timeismoney.Butinmyopinion,timeiseven∧preciousthanmoney.Why?Becausewhenmoneyisspent,westillhaveachancetoearnthemback.Butwhentimeiswasting,wecannevergetitback.Thereissomedoubtthattimeisverylimited,andevenaminuteisofgreatvaluable.Weshouldmakefulluseoftimetodothatshouldbedone.It'sthepitythatalotofpeoplestilldidn'tappreciatethevalueoftime.Theyarewastingtheirtimedoingnothingofuseful.Weshouldformthegoodhabitofraceagainsttimeandmakeadifferenceinourworld.

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  1.even后加more考查形容词比较级.由句中than可知,precious要用比较级,多音节形容词的比较级前加more

  2.them改为it考查代词.it指代前文中的time.

  3.wasting改为wasted考查动词语态.time与waste之间是动宾关系,用被动语态.

  4.some改为no考查词语用法.根据doubt后that引导的同位语从句,用nodoubt意为"无疑;必定".

  5.valuable改为value考查词语用法."of+抽象名词"构成的短语相当于该抽象名词的同根形容词,即:ofgreatvalue=veryvaluable.

  6.that改为what考查连词.do是及物动词,缺少主语,用what作其主语,同时引导宾语从句,that不可在宾语从句中充当句子成分.

  7.the改为a考查冠词.Itisapitythat…是一个固定句式,意为"遗憾的是…".

  8.didn't改为don't考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,要用一般现在时.

  9.去掉of考查介词.不定代词nothing直接接形容词作后置定语,不需要用介词.

  10.race改为racing考查动名词.of是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.

2020-08-12 21:28:55

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