Today I am talking to my dad Matthew，my hero．The reason why I admire him is because he starts every day with∧smile．And his smile always brings happy to my families．He has been looked after us carefully since many years ago．He often encourages me to keep going and not give it up．What's more，he real does care and show his love to everyone he meets．I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness．He had so many good personal quality that we all respect him．

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　　1．to改为about考查介词．talkto意为"和…说话"，talkabout意为"谈论"，此处表示：谈谈我的父亲Matthew．

　　2．because改为that考查连词．reason后接句子完整的表语从句时用that引导，reason不与because连用．

　　3．加a考查冠词．withasmile意为"带着微笑"，是固定搭配．

　　4．happy改为happiness考查名词．bring是及物动词，后接名词作其宾语，形容词happy的名词是happiness．

　　5．looked改为looking考查动词时态．根据句意：自从许多前以来他一直细心地照看我们．要用现在完成进行时态．

　　6．去掉it考查词语用法．it在此处没有指代对象，是多余的，要去掉．

　　7．real改为really考查副词．care和show是动词，要用副词修饰，形容词real的副词是really．

　　8．or改为and考查连词．compassion和arefulness是并列关系，而非选择关系，用连词and．

　　9．had改为has考查动词时态．全文讲述的是现在的事情，用一般现在时态，因主语he是单数三人称，谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式．

　　10．quality改为qualities考查名词．quality是可数名词，其前有many修饰时用复数形式．