假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last summer,I visited Silver Beach with my family in the first time.When we arrived,we saw a hundreds of people lying on the beach,enjoyed the sunshine.We were a bit disappointing as we hadn't realized that it was going to so crowded.We searched for fifteen minutes before we actual found a spot near the water to sit down.We put our things down and go for a swim.The water was such refreshing that we swam for over an hour.After that,we went to the only bar on the beach for a snack.Much to our surprises,when we got back to our spot,all of our things was wet.While we were at the bar,the tide came in.