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  【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处】

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself.Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrown

  notonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphoto

  wastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschool

  musicclub.Atoundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthat

  time,carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekingsofcarsand

  planes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbrings

  backtomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.

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  WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself.Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrown

  have

  notonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphoto

  but

  wastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschool

  taken became

  musicclub.Aroundmein∧picturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthat

  this/the that/which

  time,carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsand

  different

  planes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbrings

  latest

  backtomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.

  my

  1.of去掉,考查从句的用法,realize是及物动词后接宾语从句,因此不用of.

  2.had改为have,考查时态,句中有时间状语inthepastfewyears,表示从过去到现在一直持续的状态,应使用现在完成时.

  3.and改为but,考查固定搭配,notonly…butalso"不仅…,而且".

  4.took改为taken,考查被动语态,photo与take构成被动的关系,因此使用被动语态bedone,take的过去分词是taken.

  5.become改为became,考查谓语动词,and连接两个并列的谓语,前使用entered一般过去时,因此become也要改为一般过去时became.

  6.in后加this/the,考查代词或者定冠词,根据语境指的是"在这张图片",可以使用this或the.

  7.they改为that/which,考查定语从句的引导词,things作为先行词,引导定语从句可以使用that或者which.

  8.difference改为different,考查形容词,此处应使用形容词修饰后面的名词kinds.

  9.late改为latest,考查形容词的辨析,late"晚的",latest"最新的",根据语境是"最新的音乐唱片".

  10.your改为my,考查形容词性物主代词,联系上文语境可知此处指"我的高中时光",应使用my.

2020-08-13 01:43:52

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