假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词．

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉．

　　修改：在错的同下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

　　Alice，my best friend，devotes many energy to her lessons．She is always one of the top student in our class．She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy songs in her spare time．Alice is always willing to help other，and she often helps us with our lessons．As a volunteer，she has successful organized some voluntary activities．We paid a visit a nursing home last month，so we picked up rubbish near our school．That we did was warmly welcomed．Win honour for our school，Alice is well known to our classmates．