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  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词作斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school.Which made me very excited.I used to be too shy to speak English in the public.It was Susan who asked me practice several times in her office and correct my pronunciation and intonation.Beside,she encouraged me to be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others.I followed her advices.That was why I won the first prize.I am deep moved by what he has done for me.I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.

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  Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school.Which made me very excite

  It/That

  d.I used to be too shy to speakEnglish in the public.It was Susan who asked me∧practice several times i

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  n her office and correct my pronunciation and intonation.Beside,she encouraged me to be confident and bra

  corrected Besides

  ve whether I wanted to show my talent before others.I followed her advices.That was why I won the first pr

  if advice

  ize.I am deep moved by what he has done for me.I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.

  deeply she for

  解析:

  1.which---It/That.考查句式结构.因为Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school.Which made me very excited两句之间是句号,所以不是主从复合句,所以不用关系代词which代指我获奖这件事,而用It/That.

  2.去掉 the.考查固定短语.固定短语inpublic"在公共场合".

  3.practice前加to.考查非谓语动词.asksb.todosth.表示"要求某人去做某事",本句用了强调句式,所以简化之后是 Susan asked me practice several times in her office,表示"Susan要求我在她的办公室练习了几次".

  4.correct---corrected.考查动词的时态.根据上题可知和correct并列的谓语动词是asked,而且这里是回忆过去的,所以用过去式.

  5.Beside---Besides.考查形式相似含义不同的单词..Beside"在…旁边";Besides"此外",根据前后两句之间是递进关系,所以用Besides.

  6.whether---if.考查连词.根据句子she encouraged me to be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others.可知句义"她鼓励我要自信勇敢,如果我想要在别人面前展示我的才能".而whether表示"是否,无论",所以改为if表示如果.

  7.advices---advice.考查名词.advice"建议",是不可数名词,去掉s.

  8.deep---deeply.考查形容词和副词.根据I am deep moved by what he has done for me可知deep修饰动词move,所以用副词deeply.

  9.he---she.考查代词.根据上文可知这里是指Susan,所以用she指代.

  10.with---for.考查介词.根据 her kindness是I owe her a thousand thanks 的原因,所以用for表示原因.

2020-08-13 18:11:17

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