【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均限一词.
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Every boy and every girl are eager for success.But what can we succeed in life?Here are my opinions:
First,we must be friendly and kindly.It allows us to make friends but survive wherever we are.Second,we must set a goal,which motivates us to pursue our dreams.Third,it's better to believe in us.Only with self-confidence we realize our goals.Fourth,we should develop good characters,such as a strong will and diligence,because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble.
As far as I'm concerning,success belongs to those who keep on trying.So let's take actions now!