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  【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一】

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  WhenIwas10,oncemyparentswereawayonbusiness,butIhadtostayathomealoneforaday.Igotupearlyinthemorning,thinkingaboutdifferentactivityIcoulddo.ThefirstideawasthatIcouldplaycomputergamesallthroughthedaywithoutblamedbymymother.Minuteslater,Isaidtome,"Whydon'tIdosomethingmeaningful?"SoIplannedtocookthemealformyparents.Itriedtorecallhowmymotherusuallydidinthekitchenandarrangeeverythingonmyown.Withawholeday'seffort,Ifinallymadeit.IfeltitveryhappywhenIsawmyparentseatingthemealcheerful.Theycouldn'thelpsaythattheirsonhadgrownup.

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  WhenIwas10,oncemyparentswereawayonbusiness,but Ihadtostayat homealoneforaday.Igotupearlyinthemorning,thinkingaboutdifferent activity I

  coulddo.ThefirstideawasthatIcouldplaycomputergamesallthroughthedaywithout∧blamedbymymother.Minuteslater,Isaidto me,"Whydon'tIdosomethingmeaningful?"SoIplannedtocook the mealformyparents.Itriedtorecall how my motherusuallydidinthekitchenandarrangeeverythingonmyown.Withawholeday'seffort,Ifinallymadeit.IfeltitveryhappywhenIsawmyparentseatingthemealcheerful.Theycouldn'thelp say thattheirsonhadgrownup.

  详

  1.but改为and;考查连词,分析句意可知此处上下文之间是并列关系,而非转折,故用and.

  2.activity改为activities;考查名词单复数,different意为"不同的",后面跟名词的复数形式.

  3.在blamed前面加being;考查动词的语态,主语I与动词blame是动宾关系,故在介词without之后加being,构成被动结构.

  4.me改为myself;考查反身代词,saytooneself是固定搭配,意为"心里这样想,在心里说".

  5.the改为a;考查冠词,这里名词meal在文中第一次提到,故用a表示泛指,ameal意为"一顿饭".

  6.how改为what;考查名词性从句,这是一个宾语从句,从句中动词did缺少宾语,故用疑问代词what作从句中的宾语.

  7.arrange改为arranged;考查动词的时态,此处的动作发生在过去,要用一般过去时.

  8.去掉it;考查代词,分析句意为"我感到非常高兴",veryhappy作felt的表语,it多余,故去掉.

  9.cheerful改为cheerfully;考查副词,此处用副词作状语修饰动词eat.

  10.say改为saying;考查非谓语动词,couldn'thelpdoing是固定搭配,意为"禁不住做某事".

2020-08-14 09:17:22

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