假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I will share one experience with you．With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I wasfilled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in theexamination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，"In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to．It is natural．Don't allowthose moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself．"Her words werereminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gainedthat I deserved．
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal withdifficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．