【哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.Whenpeoplethinkofsummer,theythink"hot."Well,itreallyis.Thestrongsunshineandhightemperaturesmakeyousweatallday.Onsuchhotdays,aglassoficewatermaynotquit】

　　哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.

　　Whenpeoplethinkofsummer,theythink"hot."Well,itreallyis.Thestrongsunshineandhightemperaturesmakeyousweatallday.Onsuchhotdays,aglassoficewatermaynotquitesatisfyyourneeds,sowhynottrysomeicecream?Andtodaymytopicis“icecream”.

　　Tothisday,thehistoryoficecreamremainsamystery.However,manysaythatthefirsticecreamiscreditedtoEmperorNeroofRome.Itwasamixtureofsnow,nectar,fruitpulp,andhoney.OthersproclaimthatMarcoPolo,a13thcenturyadventurer,broughticecreamtoEuropefromtheFarEast.

　　Comparedwithyearsbefore,newtypesoficecreamturnupeverysummer.Icecreamisnolongerjustamixconsistingofmilkproducts,sugar,cornsyrup,andflavoring.Itmayalsocontaineggproducts,stabilizers,emulsifiers,andotheringredientsderivedfromnon-milksubstances.Sotodayicecreamhasalotoftaste,suchas:chocolateicecream,strawberryicecream,milkicecreamandsoon.However,thefavoriteflavormaybetheclassicvanilla.Thencomeschocolate,strawberry,Neapolitan,andchocolatechip.

　　withmoreandmoreicecreamshopsallaround,therearemanyplacesofferingacoolandquietplacetoenjoyyouricecream.Let'stakealook.

　　HaagenDazs

　　Thisisoneofthemostfamousicecreambrandsandhasbecome

　　quitepopularinChina'sbigcitieslikeBeijingandShanghai.

　　Thenicedecorationsandquietenvironmentmakeupforsuch

　　highprices.

　　Baskin-Robbins

　　ThisicecreamchaincametoChinain1993.TheChinesenamefor

　　Baskin-Robbinsis"31icecreams,"boastingthefactthatthey

　　canofferyouadifferentflavoreverydayofthemonth.Each

　　Baskin-Robbinshasthesamesimpledesign,butthiscertainly

　　doesnotaffectthetaste.

　　TCBY

　　TCBYstandsfor"TheCountry'sBestYogurt,"andisan

　　Americanbrandsellingsoftandfrozenyogurtandicecream.

　　MondoGelatoandTIAMOOffersItalianicecream.

　　Valentino

　　Valentinoisachocolateshop,buttopeoplethatvisitoften,

　　theicecreamismostattractive.Althoughthevarietyofice

　　creamislimited,theflavorisoutstanding.