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　　英语面试稿修改!限两天!Hello,everyone!MynameisXXX.I’mfromWenzhouExperimentalPrimarySchool.Myhobbyispainting,doingsportandusingcomputer.Iamgoodatit.IloveEnglish,Chineseandmath,becausetheycanmakemesmart.Iwonmany

　　英语面试稿修改!限两天!

　　Hello,everyone!MynameisXXX.I’mfromWenzhouExperimentalPrimarySchool.Myhobbyispainting,doingsportandusingcomputer.Iamgoodatit.IloveEnglish,Chineseandmath,becausetheycanmakemesmart.Iwonmanyprize,suchasdigitalmagazinemakingprize,Englishtalkingprize……Iamveryproud.Thankyouforyourlisten.

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2020-08-14 13:55

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　　Hello,everyone!MynameisXXX.I’mfromWenzhouExperimentalPrimarySchool.I'minterestedinpainting,doingsport,andIamgoodatusingcomputers.IloveEnglish,Chineseandmath,becausetheymakemesmart.Iwonmanyprizes,suchasDigitalMagazineMakingprize,EnglishTalkingprizeandsoon,soIamveryproud.Thankyouforyourlistening.

　　1.usingcomputer改成usingcomputers

　　2.iamgoodatit.改成你擅长什么!不要用it!不明确!

　　3.becausetheycanmakemesmart把can去掉!

　　4.listen改成listening做名词!

2020-08-14 13:59:24

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